The Copy Check: 5 Things to Edit After Using ChatGPT to Write Emails

Let’s be honest...

You used ChatGPT to write that email.

It saved you half an hour. It sounded… okay.

But something felt off when you re-read it.

A bit too robotic.

A little too polished.

And somehow, it didn’t sound like you at all.

That’s because ChatGPT is great for speed, but it’s not built to write high-converting emails in your voice.

The fix?

A simple editing checklist that makes sure your email connects and converts.

Let’s dive in.

Copy Check #1: Cut the Fluff

AI loves filler phrases:

  • “In today’s fast-paced world…”

  • “It’s important to note that…”

  • “This email aims to…”

Delete them. Now.

Your audience wants clarity, not corporate.

Instead, start strong.

Grab their attention in the first sentence.

Start with a hook, a bold opinion, or a personal story.

➡️ Related: The 5-Minute Mistake That's Costing You Sales

Copy Check #2: Add a Human Voice

Read it aloud.

If it doesn’t sound like something you'd say in a voice note, rewrite it.

Swap:

“This comprehensive guide will help you grow your list.”

For:

“Here’s the exact step I’d use to grow your list if you were my client.”

You’re not writing an essay. You’re writing to a human.

Copy Check #3: Make It Specific

ChatGPT will give you vague advice like:

“Make sure your emails provide value.”

Cool. But what value? Be exact.

Add:

  • A personal example

  • A recent client win

  • A niche-specific insight

The more specific, the more believable.

➡️ Related: Your Story = Your Biggest Sales Asset (Here's Why)

Copy Check #4: Inject Your Personality

If your reader can’t tell it’s you, they won’t read it.

What do you usually say when you're ranting to a biz friend?

Drop in your quirks. Use your favourite phrases. Write like you talk.

That’s how your emails stand out.

Want a cheat code?

These email templates are written so you can just add your voice and hit send.

Copy Check #5: Add a CTA That Doesn’t Feel Pushy

ChatGPT will give you:

“Click here to learn more.”

Boring. And ineffective.

Use a CTA that ties back to your reader’s motivation.

For example:

  • Want an easier way to write emails that convert? Grab these plug-and-play templates.

  • Ready to send emails that sound like you and still sell? Let’s go.

➡️ Related: How to Write Emails That Sell Without Sounding Salesy

TL;DR?

ChatGPT can help you write faster.

But without you, it won’t convert.

Use this 5-step copy check to make sure your email:

✅ Grabs attention

✅ Sounds human

✅ Feels specific

✅ Includes personality

✅ Drives action

And if you want to write faster and better?

Grab my Email Templates for Coaches & Personal Brands.

No generic filler. Just high-converting, easy-to-edit copy you’ll actually want to send.

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Hey there, Rebecca here.

My mission is to write copy that feels unmistakably you—capturing your voice, sharing your stories, and engaging your audience in a way that drives real impact.

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